does this make sense

[hollybo]

"i love you because your everything i never knew i wanted"

it looked like a proper sentence when i first wrote it but the more i look at it the less it makes sense. im sure its right though just need reasurance

[Laura456]

Makes perfect sense to me

Laura

[deedee]

It does make sense but it needs to be you're not your.

[Guillyflower]

Makes sense if you put you're (you are) I think

[lowrygirl]

It's lovely, but as the ladies above have said you must use you're.

[stillscrapping]

Agree with all of the above!!

Julie

[galadriel]

it's a beautiful thing to say about someone, whether a partner or child

[Looby Lou]

What a lovely thing to say to someone... I think this sentence will be scrap lifted by many

[Mickle]

Sounds perfect - with spelling change it will look perfect too!

[hollybo]

THANKS guys, think it was the spelling mistake that threw me